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Tuesday, March 2, 2010

Area for Improvement Question

4 comments:

  1. Take off a few pictures, a lots going on.

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  2. I don't think you have to many pictures because on the packet it told us to have a picture for every post, but i did get a little lost in your writing. So it was a little bit confusing.

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  3. You didn't have very much voice in your writing, if you work on it then your writing will be more interesting.

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  4. Organize your bio so we can follow easier. I am glad you wrote BIG though...we can always work with that!

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